Tuesday, February 07, 2006

Failing Senses

Our emotions rise with the waves,
Moving the way we are pushed,
But never thinking to dive and look below.

Our hearts race with the roads,
Confined to the sharp or broad curves,
But never thinking to slow and change streets.

Our eyes chase the bright lightning flashes,
Losing our sense to hear the thunder,
And never thinking to run inside.

If we are distracted so easily,
And our true senses fail,
Then what are we to move forward with?

2 Comments:

Blogger Justin said...

Fancy Writing indeed.

7:42 AM  
Anonymous BRENNA said...

good poem, yo
sorry i keep on commenting ur stuff
you probably think im annoying
but myspace and xanga are blocked
so here i am

11:37 AM  

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